Saturday, June 24, 2006
WHY I WANT TO BE A RED FLOWER?
A day in flower's life
Starts with drops of water flushed by the gardener
The little red flower opens eyes
With sun giving his warmth
With breeze welcoming the little 'ne
Flower starts growing and radiating fragrance
Now friend bee comes
She kisses him,touches him and loves him
Little Red flower enjoyes the company
Suddenly,she finds another companaion
...........he keeps growing
Young flower keeps growing as the day progress
With new marks of age and traumatized with bruise
These blemishes.....offered by the gleaner himself
and he wonders ....WHY?
The young flower learns the rules of life quickly
Discovers soon that world is cruel
As the darkness crawls,
Adult Flower is alone
Wondering "was life cruel?Why gardner did that?Why bee did that?"
and discovers too late
the purpose of life
was in spreading his aroma
And......forgiving everybody
And that's why .....
I want to be a Red flower ......
This Poem is a Birthday Gift to my friend Shrek.Thanks for all the good times you have given me buddy......
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4 comments:
good yaar saurabh....good meaning full poem right at the dawn of ur stint with poetry....cheerful attempt to convey beautiful message..
cheers..!keep trying..hope to see even better comming out.!
hey really a gr8 start...keep it up...n just go wit the flow of thoughts n yeah u r gud at vocabulary so u'll really come out wit wonderful poems.. :)
Thank You Sourabh. This is and will be the wonderful birthday gift that I ever got. - Shrek
That was a great message expressed in a poetic way.
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