Is it black, blue or Red
The color of loneliness
I am confused
The crowd laughs, chats or sms's
The color changes
Sometimes it is grey, othertime it is green
I am confused
When I start enjoying the desolateness
it becomes sky blue
and when I hate
I could see Orange
I am confused
Have you ever seen
The color of Loneliness
I am still Confused……..
Are you?
Written while in a treat in form of sms’s
About Me
- Saurabh
- * * * * * * * * * * * * मेरे सिरहाने जलाओ सपने. . . मुझे ज़रा सी तो नींद आए! [ Burn the incense stick of dreams closer to me. . .so that i get a little sleep,from the fragrance. . ] ~~Gulzar (In Maya Memsaab) * * * * * * * * * * * *
7 comments:
hey nice poem..... but u knw wht...u show so much ups n downs in ur graphs... sometimes a really gr8 poem... sometimes..a lil less gud poem.. but its a part of all this...so keep it up.. n keep writing... u'll graph will show a high goin curve.... ;)
no doubt its a good one...nice effort...but yaar am worried if every thing is right out there...hope it is...
cheers...!
u seem to be little toooo lonely.................Is it an impression or just an expression......
Dear Anonymous,
Yes,it's an expression....and even if it is an impression,i am wondering for whom...
I am still Confused......
-Saurabh
its just a matter of one's perception about life that can----------
make him feel solitary amongst the mob OR
make him feel mobbed in solitude
feel good............. feel happy
And it will be the end of desolation and blue..............
Dear anonymous,
To feel good...you should have some "real" thing which brings happiness...for me it's "nature" but even that too doesn't bring that happiness always...this poem was written when I was enjoying desolation in mob...sometimes it brings real happiness...again it's my perspective :-)
-Saurabh
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