I searched
Aah,Look what I found finally...
Was that a...
Rare gem in garbage
Red rose amongst thorns
Immortal song
Separated part of me
Or........
Fragrance of soil
Infinite sea waves
Scintillating rainbow
Dazzling full moon
Was that a.....
Soul penetrating evening
Silent,perfumy night
Giggling morning
Or.........
Sweet blessings
Tender proudness
Obstniate Commitment
Yes.......
It was amalgamation of all these
Known as YOU "My friend"
And...
I no more want to be sweaty
By callous souls
By aggressive beasts
By bloodsucking vampires
Who came across
On the way to meet you....
Hence...
My search ends forever
Written for Fantastic Five Friends whom I discovered in Bangalore
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13 comments:
It's small attempt to let you know how precious you are for me
-Saurabh
Frankly, Saurabh, after what you've told me about this poem, its just too difficult to comment on this. All I can say is Thank You and know that even that is far less than what you deserve.
lovely... i liked it very much...after a long time u wrote such a nice poem! :)
Thank you. It is wonderful. I also liked the positive intent in the poem since i see it rarely here. keep writing...
I thought of giving heavy comments after reading this, but thought give those valuable ones to you on some other occasion. A nice gift for a worthful friend. Tells how much you like your friends. And words are not enough to express my feeling when you told that I am one of those five friends. Thank you so much.
-- Tears rolling out of my eyes with satisfaction that I got one more good friend.
Very nice one Saurabh!!!
Thanks Saurabh for this.... its really hard to say anything now...
I will not say thanks for this
because thanks is too small a word to express the feelings .
Thats all I have to say , U know it very well that I don't believe in saying things here .
Well A very nice poem , that shows how much u value your friends .
And I am honoured to be one of them.
Very nice poem. :-) and you are lucky to have got such a variety of friends. But I say five is still less. :-)
Save some sweat for more. Fight some more vampires, beat some more beasts, who knows there may be more gems in your way.
Thanks a lot for such lovely comments to all the readers,mostly close frnds....I will keep writng for u guys.
Abhi,
I will surely do that..I will not let go so much of life running thru my veins to waste...thanks for the boost...they are coming from all over at right time
Love,
Saurabh
no comments......!
I like ur poem saurabh.....
Hmm....GOOD Job.
bas ek baat samajh me nahi aati
...Ek Engineer..&..Poet
rare combination.
and i m feeling great because i can comment on this rare GEM.
..SWATI..
To Swati Bhabhi,
Thanks a lot for appreciation...
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