Sunday, April 22, 2007

बेवजह

कहती है खामोशियाँ ये बात इस तरह
लेता है किसी का ये क्यों अहसान बेवजह !

चलते हुए तेरे कदमो से राहे गूंजती रही
कोई और जो चला तो हुई सुनसान बेवजह !

किल्कारिया भरते थे जो लम्हे सभी...कभी
सूजी है आज आंखें,रोये वो नादान बेवजह !

ढलता रहा सूरज कि तरह,बिखरा के रौशनी
ये रात क्यों आयी...हो तुझसे अनजान बेवजह !
जाना तो था 'ख़्याल ' साथ बहोत दूर तक हमे
चलो ढूँढता हूं अब "वो" मेहमान बेवजह !

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Kahtee hai khamoshiyan ye baat iss tarah
leta hai kissi ka ye kyu ahsaan bewajah

Chalte hue tere kadmo se raahe goonjti rahi
koi aur jo chala toh hui sunsaan bewajah

Kilkaariya bharte the jo lamhe sabhi kabhi
sooji hai aj aankhe,roye jo naadan bevajah

Dhalta raha sooraj ki tarah,bikhra ke roshni
Ye raat kyu aayi...ho tujhse anjaan bevajah

Jaana toh tha saath 'khayaal' bahot door tak hume
Chalo dhoondhta hoon abb woh mehmaan bewajah

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Bahut Badhiya... simply fantastic :)

Anonymous said...

alfaz ki kami hai ye kehne ke liye ke how gud this gazal is. Saurabh mein bhi madat karunga in searching this mehmaan but this search will be worth and not Bewajah..

Keep writing more stuff like this, I love urdu and do tell from where such ideas come :)

Overall a gud creation 8/10.

Anonymous said...

a very good effort,in an un treaded territory..making such an impressive mark with the first one of ur gazal is fantabulous..keep thinking in this direction too...!!!

Unknown said...

kafi achha gazal hai.
Aise hi nagmen milti rahe hume Bewajah !

Anonymous said...

bahut acchaa....
kuch bhi bewajah nahi hotaa..
kabhi wajah khud hum define karte hain.. aur kabhi koi aur...

godd going.. keep it up...

Abhik said...

This one has a particular introspective quality in it. Worthy of reading a number of times. Good.