mujhe na tumne samjha
na main tumhein samjha paayi
yun hi har din beet gaya
aur yun hi har raat gayi
Aaj jo dekhun mud ke peeche
yaad vo sab kuch aaa baitha
Khud ka dil dikhla pana
jab itna mushkil ho baitha
Jhutha sa abhimaan liye
hum donon apni raah chale
main na jane kahan gayi
tum na jane kahan chale
Unn rahon pe gar mud kar
tumne ek bar roka hota
toh shayad main tham jati
abhimaan na vo paida hota
Fir yun hi jhuthi aas liye
main rah tumhari dekha kii
na tumne fir aana chaha
na maine hi duri kam kii
Ummedon yun hi har gayi
sapne bhi dum tod gaye
tum ko khokar maine jaana
munjil ko ham chod chale
Ae kash na vo lamha hota
jab main tum par tab barsi thi
ya kash na vo lamha hota
jab tumne sahnaa chod diya
Abb apni yahi kahani hai
ki umar yunhi bitani hai
na tum sa abb koi aayega
na dil ko dhadka payega
koi kitna bhi chahe abb
par dil na use aapnayega
Hinduism says "Choice is an illusion" but the poet here chose to be ANONYMOUS......
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8 comments:
Just too good. I am touched by the intense melancholy of the poem.
-Chandan
I wish i had written this one....probably not with this terrific rhythm though,but yeah...
"Hazaaron khwaishein aisi
ki har khwaish pe dum nikle
Bahut nikle mere armaan
lekin phir bhi kam nikle"
-Mirza ghalib
It's my time to retire from hindi poetry....because I hate to loose :)
Keep producing gems like this,
Saurabh
20 out of 10 :-) really too good. I m fida on this perticular....
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NICE ONE...............
AMAZINGLY TRUE SOMETIMES..............................
Wat a good piece of Poetry Saurabh that also from an engineer, but ye to sach hai ke har insaan ke seene mein dil hota hai n na tum sa abb koi aayega na dil ko dhadka payega, a gr8 piece of poetry. Continue this good work.
good one.i want to read more from you.keep writing for this friend. swati
simply beautiful...style and content..flow and end...marvelous...!
Too good. Liked it very much. Each stanza has got a beautiful meaning.
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