This is live commentary of sunset seen from Marine Drive, Cochin.This small account is intended for the blog reader to go ,experience and share the SUNSET phenomena on their own………..today
We were sitting motionless on Marine drive …watching ships blowing horns and birds chirping and returning for their nests…almost clear blue sky with few clouds hovering here and there…. A perfect idyllic setting for any nature lover Suddenly I realized that magnet earth is attracting small in size, reddish in color –SUN.
The ally of earth, horizon used clouds as rope….who first tightens neck of sun and then entire body. Sun starts to swell as nerves have also been tied by the blackish clouds.
The color changes, blobbing continues and sun now starts bleeding….. The splash of blood partially fills blue sky and calm backwaters with crimson color. As the clouds grip, hapless sun cries “Save my soul”…..few passing by ships try save in vain……
The horizon opens its mouth wide …badly wounded, already bleeding sun goes half inside the horizon and then completely…the seagulls and crows now start to fly over backwaters to have a feast over sun’s blood ,now spilled all over.
The slow death of sun is tragic but tomorrow, a new sun will reincarnate from the womb of the same horizon……..I have seen it…...probably somewhere in Pondycherry…...
Don’t you feel like having a look on sunset?
Written for all the nature lovers……....
4 comments:
yaaar its really good saurabh bhai....!
u hv really surpassed all my expectations regarding what,i thought at max u can express with ur pen....with this one...
this one is really good....
really good...
congrates for this one...i enjoyed reading this...!
Kings used to have the best poets in their assembly to see the world in its best form. In that era, you should have been a part of some King's leutenants of poets.
Sun, which is so furious and hot,would be surprised to know that it is so beautiful and this beauty can be perceived in ur writings. A writer's perspective. Keep up ur good work.
Kings used to have the best poets in their assembly to see the world in its best form. In that era, you should have been a part of some King's leutenants of poets.
Sun, which is so furious and hot,would be surprised to know that it is so beautiful and this beauty can be perceived in ur writings. A writer's perspective. Keep up ur good work.
this one is the mind blowing personification ....... no words to say nemore ..a suggestion "try writing a poem on this" ....n it wud also b superub........... a gr8 thinker ....hmmmm:)
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